Saturday, April 24, 2010

Misunderstood

Day 24: I cannot believe it's Day 24! Today's post was to use the Phrase Finder website to inspire a poem. Lots of phrases and their derivations to choose from. A tough but interesting prompt...


Misunderstood

We are not amused

By the way you refuse

To laugh more quietly,

Stop talking back,

Accept our labels

For what you lack.

We will have no more

Idolizing ambitious bovines

Who insist on leaping

Over celestial signs.

Nor can we accept

the way you arrive

Signaling merrily

With lighthearted chimes.

Too often your p’s and q’s

Don’t pass the test

And your consumption

Of salt is alarming at best.

What’s more, you never keep

the black bird in sight,

when you finally show up you sing

of far green slopes and crimson night.

There’s nothing about you

That we can understand

So you’re on your own now.

Good luck in never-never land.



4 comments:

  1. Even though I am not sure what this *means*, you create a world here. You pull off the sing-song but not too sing-sing very well, in a way to let us know you are serious. Especially liked "of far green slopes and crimson night"!

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  2. Sounds like the song of a misfit.

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  3. I hear a song of rejection, of separation for someone unwilling to march in formation. By what is not said, the object of the poem strikes me as someone wholly interesting and worth knowing?

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