Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Even Now

Day 7: RWP prompt--humorous 5-line love poem:

Even Now

Spitting cherry seeds
out the window of your car
laughter reaching out
like the endless road ahead
even now it makes me smile
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7 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 7, 2010 at 1:30 PM

    You touch on some wonderfully specific yet universal moments. For me, it was watermelon seeds!

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  2. Jason RiedyApril 7, 2010 at 2:30 PM

    You brought a smile to me, too. Thank you!

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  3. MarianneApril 7, 2010 at 2:58 PM

    Light and breezy and happy ... loved your little tanka!

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  4. KatieApril 7, 2010 at 3:52 PM

    I loved your tanka! It is sweet and personal, and yet...other people can relate to it. It flows well.

    http://kagerrr.tumblr.com/

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  5. rallentandaApril 7, 2010 at 4:14 PM

    Lovely!

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  6. AnonymousApril 7, 2010 at 5:07 PM

    thrz nothin like drivin in a car with yr lover smilin spittin seeds... erotic engine

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  7. Area 17April 7, 2010 at 5:26 PM

    Love it! ;-)

    Alan
    With Words
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